AN: This was written as a small fun scene within my notebook on a bus after college. It really does bring out the nature of Jack and Rileys relationship... I wouldn't say they were the best of friends!
Page one:
Panel 1: Long/wide shot. Jack and Riley fast asleep on the floor of a tent. They’re sharing a pillow and blanket, Jack looking as if he was taking up the majority of the pillow.
Panel 2: Close up (on Riley). He’s staring at Jack with one eye open.
Panel 3: Mid shot. Riley sitting up, watching Jack who’s now wrapping his arms round the majority of the pillow and is snoring away.
Panel 4: Close/Mid shot. Riley pulling the pillow back towards himself.
Panel 5: Riley holding onto one side of the pillow, trying to pull it more towards him. Jack (still asleep) is holding onto the other gripping it hard.
RILEY THOUGHT BUBBLE: I WISH HE WASN’T SUCH A HEAVY SLEEPER!
Panel 6: Close up on Jacks eye open wide.
SFX: SHRIINKKKK
Page Two:
Splashpage: Riley, now standing up holding a fencing sword out towards Jack. Jack, sitting up, looking rather eye wide/dishevelled/shocked/bemused.
TO BE CONTINUED.
(AN: MWHAHAHAHA! :P)
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